Different shots and locations
Change the colour? It looks quite cold.
More lip syncing
Different locations
Teacher Feedback
I
love the style and the look – it really works, but there isn’t enough to get
the highest grade. Because the track is short, you need to make every second
count. What about some cutaways in the same style – perhaps long shots outside
to intercut with the CUs? You need much more lip synch. Some of the framing is
very much out with the top half of the head cut off.
Katie Morrice
- I like the concept of the video, how the song relates to the music video. It works well!
- Needs more angles and cuts
- More lip-synching
- Structured well, easily relatable to the audience.
- Maybe different locations?
Katie Morrice
- I like the concept of the video, how the song relates to the music video. It works well!
- Needs more angles and cuts
- More lip-synching
- Structured well, easily relatable to the audience.
- Maybe different locations?
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