MAG ADVERT

FIRST DRAFT

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD AD FOR MAG.

DIGIPAK

My digi pa

Audience Feedback

Class Feedback

Different shots and locations

Change the colour? It looks quite cold.

More lip syncing

Different locations

Teacher Feedback

I love the style and the look – it really works, but there isn’t enough to get the highest grade. Because the track is short, you need to make every second count. What about some cutaways in the same style – perhaps long shots outside to intercut with the CUs? You need much more lip synch. Some of the framing is very much out with the top half of the head cut off. 

Katie Morrice

- I like the concept of the video, how the song relates to the music video.  It works well!
- Needs more angles and cuts
- More lip-synching
- Structured well, easily relatable to the audience.
- Maybe different locations?

1st draft of music video 2012